Translation commentary on 1 Maccabees 8:23

May all go well with the Romans and with the nation of the Jews at sea and on land for ever: This introduction to the treaty states the wish that there should never be an occasion to turn to the actual terms of the treaty. Good News Bible translates it well, saying “May things go well forever for the Romans and for the Jewish nation on land and sea!” However, Goldstein’s translation may be a bit better: “Forever may there be peace between the Romans and the nation of the Jews on sea and land!”

And may sword and enemy be far from them: The word sword refers to “war” (Good News Bible). Another model for this clause is “May they never have enemies or have to go to war!”

Quoted with permission from Bullard, Roger A. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on 1-2 Maccabees. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2011. For this and other handbooks for translators see here.