4The men of David said to him, “Here is the day of which the Lord said to you, ‘I will give your enemy into your hand, and you shall do to him as it seems good to you.’ ” Then David went and stealthily cut off a corner of Saul’s cloak.
In a Fang oral adaptation the Hebrew that is translated in English as “stealthily cut off a corner of Saul’s cloak” is translated in a culturally specific way.
Case / Case (2019) explain: “In order to communicate the stealth of David’s actions, [the oral interpreter] Acacio added a colorful image of the sneakiest animal of the jungle doing the sneakiest of actions: David snuck up behind Saul ‘like a chameleon drawing a hunting bow to shoot an arrow.'”
The name that is transliterated as “David” in English is translated in Spanish Sign Language with the sign signifying king and a sling (referring to 1 Samuel 17:49 and 2 Samuel 5:4). (Source: John Elwode in The Bible Translator 2008, p. 78ff.)
This verse contains a quotation within a quotation. Good News Translation has turned the embedded quotation, that is, the words of the LORD, into an indirect quotation, providing a good model for certain other languages.
Here is: translates the Hebrew particle traditionally rendered “behold.” The focusing particle actually occurs twice in this verse, but in this case “behold the day” may be more naturally translated “now is the time” or “this is the opportunity.”
Into your hand: see the comments on 4.8.
Good to you: literally “good in your eyes” (so Fox).
David stealthily, or secretly, cut off the skirt of Saul’s robe. The word stealthily, as well as all that follows, implies that Saul did not know what David had done. Good News Translation therefore says “without Saul’s knowing it.” The skirt (literally “corner”) refers to the extremity or end of the robe. Various renderings are found in English translations: “a piece” (Revised English Bible), “an end” (New American Bible), “a corner” (New Revised Standard Version), and “the border” (New Jerusalem Bible). The Hebrew word translated robe refers to a sleeveless, cloak-like outer garment. The word “cloak” (New Revised Standard Version, Revised English Bible, New Jerusalem Bible, Fox) may be a better translation than robe.
Quoted with permission from Omanson, Roger L. and Ellington, John E. A Handbook on the First and Second Books of Samuel, Volume 1. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2001. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
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