Translation commentary on Leviticus 11:13, Lev 11:14, Lev 11:15, Lev 11:16, Lev 11:17, Lev 11:18, Lev 11:19

These verses deal with the third category of creatures which the Hebrews considered “birds.” The terminology used in that day does not correspond exactly to that which is known in the modern world and may also be at variance with other views of what constitutes a “bird.” For example, in many languages the bat mentioned in verse 19 cannot be called a “bird.” The list is made up of no less than twenty species, which leads many commentators to believe that it was intended to be exhaustive (the parallel list in Deut 14.12-18 has twenty-one names). Ten of these names appear only here and in the Deuteronomy 14 list, but nowhere else in the Old Testament. Five others are found in only one additional case outside the two lists. For this reason it is extremely difficult to identify with any degree of certainty all the species involved. Even the ancient versions such as Greek and Latin demonstrate considerable differences in their translation of these names.

In Hebrew all the names on the list are given in singular form (compare Revised Standard Version), but Good News Translation has taken into account the fact that they are collective nouns and has made them plural in translation.

Since this is the beginning of the third group discussed in this chapter, a new paragraph should be started here. It may be well in many languages to use the same kind of introductory sentence as in verses 2b and 9. The passive formulation shall not be eaten may be rendered “You must not eat….”

The repetition of the idea they are an abomination (compare verse 10) is significant because it appears for emphasis. Unless these repetitions are unacceptably awkward in the receptor language, it will be well to retain them in translation.

Many of the names on this list are followed by the expression according to its kind (compare Gen 1), which seems to indicate that the species in question is divided into two or more subgroups. In one case (verse 15) the name is preceded by the word “all” or “any” (every raven in Revised Standard Version), but this does not really change the meaning. So it has been omitted in Good News Translation.

The second word in verse 18 is usually translated pelican because of the ancient Greek and Latin renderings, but some commentators find this unconvincing in the light of the fact that this same bird is mentioned in Isaiah 34.11, Zephaniah 2.14, and Psalm 102.7 as one living in the desert or in ruins. Perhaps the renderings of New International Version or New English Bible are more likely.

In some languages it may be necessary to translate several terms by a single word in the receptor language. For example, there may be only one word for the various kinds of owls mentioned in the list. Translators may then have to say “the different kinds of owls” or something similar. In other languages there may be no word for certain of the birds in the list. If this is the case, it may be necessary to resort to a borrowing which is explained in a footnote or glossary entry. And although the final term in the list may not be considered a bird in the receptor language, it must be remembered that it was apparently included in this category in ancient Jewish thinking. So it should be a part of the bird list in this passage and not be placed in a special category. Even though the receptor-language classification of birds may be entirely different from the Old Testament system, the translator must respect what is found in the text. But an explanatory footnote will certainly be acceptable.

Quoted with permission from Péter-Contesse, René and Ellington, John. A Handbook on Leviticus. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1990. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Leviticus 11:26, Lev 11:17, Lev 11:28

In order to avoid the repetition of several different redundant phrases, Good News Translation has restructured verses 24-28. Revised Standard Version, on the other hand, represents a much more literal rendering of the Hebrew. If a radical restructuring such as in Good News Translation is undertaken in the receptor language, it should be done on the basis of that language’s requirements and not just as a literal rendering of Good News Translation. A careful check should be made to be sure that all the components of meaning appear in the restructured version.

If the restructuring is less radical than in Good News Translation, verse 26 should probably begin by repeating or rephrasing the words at the beginning of verse 24: “By these [animals] you shall become unclean” or “These are the animals that make people unclean….”

Which parts the hoof …: see verse 3. Here two distinct categories of animals are involved: those which are not cloven-hoofed (such as horses and donkeys) and those which do not chew the cud (such as pigs). The text does not intend to speak of two characteristics of a single group of animals but of two separate categories. The translation should make this clear. Note that verse 3 has “cloven-footed,” while here the term is “cloven-hoofed.” However, the same term can be used in translation for both expressions.

That go on their paws: literally “that walk on their palms.” The distinction seems to be between those animals that walk on the flat of their feet (like dogs and cats), and those that have a hollow in their hoofs and whose feet therefore do not completely touch the ground when walking. Some versions make this clearer by using an expression like “flat paws” (New English Bible). Jerusalem Bible translated “on the flat of their foot,” but the revision of New Jerusalem Bible has “on the flat of their paws.” Perhaps the use of the word “paws” by itself, as in Good News Translation, will be adequate to convey this meaning in some languages.

Among the animals that go on all fours: literally “… that walk on fours.” In some languages this may be redundant, coming after the words that go on their paws.

Quoted with permission from Péter-Contesse, René and Ellington, John. A Handbook on Leviticus. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1990. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .