The following is a complete back-translation of Psalm 24 from Nyaneka:
1 Earth and-what is-in-it is the Lord God’s,
world and-things all which-are-in it.
2 Lord world this he-built on-seas
it-is-carried established on-streams of-water.
3 On-the-mountain of-Lord God who can go-up?
In-sanctuary who can stand?
4 It-is-that-one that-one who-have-cleansed hands
and-who-has good heart,
that-one who-does-not-give life his to-idols
who-does-not swear to-idols.
5 This-one will-receive from-Lord God good blessing
with-righteousness the-salvation of-him from-God.
6 The-generation who seek-him like-this will-live,
those who-adore the-God of-Jacob.
7 Open the-gates, heavy-doors of-heads,
the-gates eternal
so-that King who-is-glorified can-enter.
8 King who-is-glorified is-who? \
Lord God, powerful of-force
Lord powerful in-war.
9 Open the-gates, heavy-doors of-heads,
the-gates eternal
so-that King who-is-glorified can-enter.
10 King who-is-glorified is-who?
Lord God of-the-host of-war,
this-one [is] King who-is-glorified.
Source: Christopher S. Tachick in Wendland / Zogbo 2019, p. 84ff.
God transcends gender, but most languages are limited to grammatical gender expressed in pronouns. In the case of English, this is traditionally confined to “he” (or in the forms “his,” “him,” and “himself”), “she” (and “her,” “hers,” and “herself”), and “it” (and “its” and “itself”).
Modern Mandarin Chinese, however, offers another possibility. Here, the third-person singular pronoun is always pronounced the same (tā), but it is written differently according to its gender (他 is “he,” 她 is “she,” and 它/牠 is “it” and their respective derivative forms). In each of these characters, the first (or upper) part defines the gender (man, woman, or thing/animal), while the second element gives the clue to its pronunciation.
In 1930, after a full century with dozens of Chinese translations, Bible translator Wang Yuande (王元德) coined a new “godly” pronoun: 祂. Chinese readers immediately knew how to pronounce it: tā. But they also recognized that the first part of that character, signifying something spiritual, clarified that each person of the Trinity has no gender aside from being God.
While the most important Protestant and Catholic Chinese versions respectively have opted not to use 祂, some Bible translations do and it is widely used in hymnals and other Christian materials. Among the translations that use 祂 to refer to “God” were early versions of Lü Zhenzhong’s (呂振中) version (New Testament: 1946, complete Bible: 1970). R.P. Kramers (in The Bible Translator 1956, p. 152ff.) explains why later versions of Lü’s translation did not continue with this practice: “This new way of writing ‘He,’ however, has created a minor problem of its own: must this polite form be used whenever Jesus is referred to? Lü follows the rule that, wherever Jesus is referred to as a human being, the normal ta (他) is written; where he is referred to as divine, especially after the ascension, the reverential ta (祂) is used.”
In that system one kind of pronoun is used for humans (male and female alike) and one for natural elements, non-liquid masses, and some spiritual entities (one other is used for large animals and another one for miscellaneous items). While in these languages the pronoun for spiritual entities used to be employed when referring to God, this has changed into the use of the human pronoun.
Lynell Zogbo (in The Bible Translator 1989, p. 401ff) explains in the following way: “From informal discussions with young Christians especially, it would appear that, at least for some people, the experience and/or concepts of Christianity are affecting the choice of pronoun for God. Some people explain that God is no longer ‘far away,’ but is somehow tangible and personal. For these speakers God has shifted over into the human category.”
In Kouya, God (the Father) and Jesus are referred to with the human pronoun ɔ, whereas the Holy Spirit is referred to with a non-human pronoun. (Northern Grebo and Western Krahn make a similar distinction.)
Eddie Arthur, a former Kouya Bible translation consultant, says the following: “We tried to insist that this shouldn’t happen, but the Kouya team members were insistent that the human pronoun for the Spirit would not work.”
In Burmese, the pronoun ko taw (ကိုယ်တော်) is used either as 2nd person (you) or 3rd person (he, him, his) reference. “This term clearly has its root in the religious language in Burmese. No ordinary persons are addressed or known by this pronoun because it is reserved for Buddhist monks, famous religious teachers, and in the case of Christianity, the Trinity.” (Source: Gam Seng Shae in The Bible Translator 2002, p. 202ff.)
In Thai, the pronoun phra`ong (พระองค์) is used, a gender-neutral pronoun which must refer to a previously introduced royal or divine being. Similarly, in Northern Khmer, which is spoken in Thailand, “an honorific divine pronoun” is used for the pronoun referring to the persons of the Trinity (source: David Thomas in The Bible Translator 1993, p. 445). In Urak Lawoi’, another language spoken in Thailand, the translation often uses tuhat (ตูฮัด) — “God” — ”as a divine pronoun where Thai has phra’ong even though it’s actually a noun.” (Source for Thai and Urak Lawoi’: Stephen Pattemore)
The English “Contemporary Torah” addresses the question of God and gendered pronouns by mostly avoiding pronouns in the first five books of the Hebrew Bible/Old Testament (unless God is referred to as “lord,” “father,” “king,” or “warrior”). It does that by either using passive constructs (“He gave us” vs. “we were given”), by using the adjective “divine” or by using “God” rather than a pronoun.
Some Protestant English Bibles use a referential capitalized spelling when referring to the persons of the Trinity with “He,” “His,” “Him,” or “Himself.” This includes for instance the New American Standard Bible, but most translations, especially those published in the 21st century, do not. Two other languages where this is also done (in most Bible translations) are the closely related Indonesian and Malay. In both languages this follows the language usage according to the Qur’an, which in turn predicts that usage (see Soesilo in The Bible Translator 1991, p. 442ff. and The Bible Translator 1997, p. 433ff. ).
See also this chapter in the World Atlas of Language Structures on different approaches to personal pronouns.
In the opening hymn of praise (verses 1-2), the two lines of verse 1 are parallel, both of them stating that the earth and all things and beings on it belong to Yahweh; literally “To Yahweh (belong) the earth and its fulness, the world and those who dwell in it.” This includes all created things, animate and inanimate, human and animal.
Earth and world are not distinguished here in their meanings. The Hebrew word translated earth is simply the general term and is far more common than the Hebrew term translated world. In many translations it will not be possible to find synonyms. Consequently one must sometimes say “The world and everything on it belong to the LORD; all the people on it are his too” or “Everything in the world belongs to the LORD; even all the people belong to him.”
Fulness thereof means everything that is in the world, all the objects and beings that fill it.
For: as translated by Revised Standard Version and others, this gives the justification for the statement in line a about Yahweh’s complete dominion over the world.
In verse 2 Revised Standard Version uses the past perfect of the verbs (has founded … established); Good News Translation‘s simple past (“built … laid”) seems more appropriate, since the verbs refer to the act of creation.
Verse 2 is also made up of two parallel lines, both of them saying the same thing about how Yahweh created the world. The two verbs, “to found, establish” and “to make firm” (see 7.9), are nearly synonymous, as are the two nouns the seas and the rivers, both of them referring to the vast subterranean ocean, “the deep waters beneath the earth” (Good News Translation; see Gen 7.11; Exo 20.4; Psa 136.6), upon which the earth rested. The earth was thought to be supported by pillars (the “foundations”), which were also the bases of the mountains (see 18.7, 15; 1 Sam 2.8; Pro 8.29; Jonah 2.6), which reached down to the underworld. For a more complete description of the Hebrew view of the world, see the discussion and illustration at 104.5-6. Simply to translate the two words literally by the seas and the rivers, as Revised Standard Version has done, fails to convey the meaning of the original. New Jerusalem Bible “the ocean … the nether-streams” is hardly an improvement. Biblia Dios Habla Hoy has combined and shortened the lines as follows: “For the Lord laid the foundations of the earth, and placed it firm on the seas and the rivers.” Here “the seas and the rivers” is also misleading. The seas and the rivers were probably used quite commonly as a pair of terms with poetic effect in Hebrew, but this effect will usually be lost in translation.
He has founded it upon the seas is difficult to translate, where the largest body of water is a local river. However, the switch from seas to “deep waters,” as in Good News Translation, provides a model. Furthermore, it will often be necessary to provide a footnote which will clarify this Hebrew view of the universe.
Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Reyburn, William D. A Handbook on the Book of Psalms. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1991. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
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