boat, ship

The Hebrew, Latin and Greek that is translated “boat” or “ship” in English is translated in Chichimeca-Jonaz as “that with which we can walk on water” (source: Ronald D. Olson in Notes on Translation January, 1968, p. 15ff.), in Chitonga as a term in combination with bwato or “dugout canoe” (source: Wendland 1987, p. 72), and in Tangale as inj am or “canoe-of water” (inj — “canoe” — on its own typically refers to a traditional type of carved-out log for sleeping) (source: Andy Warren-Rothlin).

In Kouya it is translated as ‘glʋ ‘kadʋ — “big canoe.”

Philip Saunders (p. 231) explains how the Kouya team arrived at that conclusion:

“Acts chapter 27 was a challenge! It describes Paul’s sea voyage to Italy, and finally Rome. There is a storm at sea and a shipwreck on Malta, and the chapter includes much detailed nautical vocabulary. How do you translate this for a landlocked people group, most of whom have never seen the ocean? All they know are small rivers and dugout canoes.

“We knew that we could later insert some illustrations during the final paging process which would help the Kouya readers to picture what was happening, but meanwhile we struggled to find or invent meaningful terms. The ‘ship’ was a ‘big canoe’ and the ‘passengers’ were ‘the people in the big canoe’; the ‘crew’ were the ‘workers in the big canoe’; the ‘pilot’ was the ‘driver of the big canoe’; the ‘big canoe stopping place’ was the ‘harbour’, and the ‘big canoe stopping metal’ was the ‘anchor’!”

In Lokạạ it is translated as ukalangkwaa, lit. “English canoe.” “The term was not coined for the Bible translation, but rather originated in colonial times when the English arrived in Nigeria on ships. The indigenous term for a canoe was modified to represent the large, ocean-going ship of the English.” (Source: J.A. Naudé, C.L. Miller Naudé, J.O. Obono in Acta Theologica 43/2, 2023, p. 129ff. )

See also ships of Tarshish, harbor, anchor, and sailor.

Translation commentary on 2 Esdras 12:42

For of all the prophets you alone are left to us: The conjunction For may be omitted (so Good News Bible, Contemporary English Version). Ezra is referred to as a prophet here and in 2 Esd 1.1 (see the comments there). This reflects the Jewish understanding of the author’s day that the days of the prophets had ended with Ezra. This clause may be rendered “You are the only one of our prophets left to speak to us” (Contemporary English Version).

Like a cluster of grapes from the vintage, and like a lamp in a dark place, and like a haven for a ship saved from a storm: The people compare Ezra to a cluster of grapes, a lamp and a haven to indicate their dependence on him for security in their situation. The word vintage refers to a grape harvest, and the cluster of grapes is the last bunch of grapes waiting to be picked (see the comments on 2 Esd 9.21). Ezra, as the last prophet, is like those grapes. So like a cluster of grapes from the vintage may be rendered “like the last cluster of grapes to be picked [or, that they will pick].” For lamp see the comments on 2 Esd 10.2. A haven is a port or other sheltered place along shore where a ship may escape the winds.

Good News Bible provides a good model for this verse, and so does Contemporary English Version, which says:

• You are the only one of our prophets left to speak to us. You’re as special as the last bunch of grapes in the vineyard or an oil lamp in a dark place or a safe harbor for a ship in a storm.

Quoted with permission from Bullard, Roger A. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on 1-2 Esdras. (UBS Helps for Translators). Miami: UBS, 2019. For this and other handbooks for translators see here.